Review 2D Short-Film Scripts

I’ve written a small slate of short-film scripts for a 2D animated anthology—more than three pieces, each running well past the ten-page mark. Before I lock storyboards or approach voice talent, I need an experienced eye to comb through the material and tell me two things:

1. What works or doesn’t from a narrative and visual-storytelling standpoint—scene flow, pacing, dialogue, character motivation, emotional beats, and opportunities for stronger visual gags or action.
2. A realistic production estimate for each script: ballpark runtime, shot count, potential complexity red-flags, and an outline of the resources or crew roles I’m likely to need.

You’ll receive the drafts as PDFs; please return annotated copies along with a concise summary report for every script so I can compare effort across the collection. If you prefer using Final Draft or Celtx notes, just let me know—format is flexible as long as the feedback is clear and actionable.

I’m aiming for grounded, professional guidance rather than a full rewrite, though I’m open to brief line edits where clarity is an issue. Turnaround within a week of receipt would be ideal, but propose what’s comfortable for you—quality matters most.