Polish My Romance Novel Draft

I have a completed romance manuscript that now needs a meticulous pass before I query agents. The text must read smoothly and professionally, so I want a full line-by-line proofread for grammar and punctuation, plus a deeper edit to ensure tonal consistency and style throughout. Beyond the technical cleanup, I’d like fresh eyes on character arcs and overall plot flow—flag any moments that feel rushed, any dialogue rings false, or any subplot that wanders off course.

The file is currently in Microsoft Word; please work with Track Changes so I can review every adjustment. A short editorial letter summarising bigger-picture observations on character development and pacing will be the final step.

Deliverables
• Word document with all in-line edits tracked
• Brief editorial letter (1–2 pages) outlining structural notes and next-step suggestions

If this scope suits your skill set, I’m ready to share the manuscript right away.