Novel Line Edit for Clarity

My 88,000-word novel is ready for its line edit. I need every sentence examined for clarity and flow, with the Chicago Manual of Style guiding all decisions. While grammar, punctuation, and structure will naturally improve along the way, the main brief is to refine meaning—making sure each line says exactly what it should without losing voice or rhythm.

Dialogue drives much of the story, so I’d like special attention paid to how characters speak: authenticity, consistency in tone, and smooth back-and-forth pacing. If any exchange feels off, a query in the margin is welcome.

Deliverables
• Word document with Track Changes showing all edits
• Clean copy with changes accepted
• Brief style sheet noting recurring choices, spellings, and any open questions

I’m happy to answer chapter-specific questions as you work, and I’m flexible on milestones for an efficient turnaround. If this focus on meaning, dialogue, and Chicago style fits your expertise, I look forward to collaborating.