Italian Translation Refinement for Kids' Materials

I have a 224-page illustrated PDF (about 9,050 words) made up of chore charts, dresser labels and toy-bin labels that was automatically translated from English into Italian. I now need a native speaker to make it genuinely useful for Italian-speaking children and their families.

Here’s what matters most to me: every phrase must sound natural, age-appropriate and culturally appropriate. While doing that, please correct any spelling, grammar, gender or article issues, keep terminology consistent and, wherever shorter or clearer wording would help children or parents understand something more quickly, feel free to suggest it.

I prefer a balanced tone—a mixture of everyday Italian and the occasional slightly more formal term when appropriate.

Practical points:

* Images and the overall design must remain exactly as they are.
* If any text overflows, is cut off or looks misaligned, please flag it.
* Corrections should be delivered by directly annotating the PDF.
* If a note by page number is easier for a complicated correction, that is also acceptable, but annotation inside the PDF is my main requirement.

Deliverable:

An annotated PDF with every correction or suggestion clearly visible, allowing me to review and implement the changes without guessing.

If this sounds straightforward and enjoyable, let’s get started right away.