Humanize MBA Dissertation Writing

I have a fully written MBA dissertation that now needs a thorough language makeover so it reads as if it were crafted naturally by a graduate student, not a machine. All research findings, data, citations, and the existing chapter structure must stay exactly as they are; what I need is the wording itself transformed.

The priority is clear: reduce every trace of AI-generated phrasing to improve originality and bring the similarity score down to an acceptable academic level. In practice that means polishing sentence flow, tightening transitions, and boosting overall clarity—yet avoiding the overly glossy style that algorithmic writing often produces. Think of it as a careful paraphrase and humanisation exercise rather than a rewrite of the arguments.

Key expectations
• Every paragraph rewritten in fresh, plagiarism-free language without altering meaning, evidence, or references.
• Tone consistent with formal academic English while sounding authentically student-authored.
• Final text ready to pass standard plagiarism and AI-detection tools alongside supervisor review.

If you have a track record in academic editing, particularly at postgraduate level, and you’re confident you can make the prose feel naturally scholarly while keeping the substance intact, I’d love to collaborate.