Fantasy Novel Readability Copyedit

I have a completed adult-market fantasy manuscript that now needs a careful copyedit focused on flow and overall readability. The story, characters, and world-building are locked; what I’m looking for is a fresh set of eyes to smooth sentence rhythm, tighten paragraphs, and flag any wording that might trip up a reader.

You’ll receive the full manuscript in Word and I’d like the edit returned with Track Changes enabled so I can review every adjustment. A brief style sheet noting recurring choices or suggestions for stronger consistency would also be appreciated.

If you spot glaring grammar or punctuation issues along the way, feel free to fix them, but the primary goal is a seamless reading experience that will keep adult fantasy fans fully immersed.

When we’re done, I expect:
• The marked-up Word file with all changes visible
• A clean, final version ready for formatting
• A concise style sheet (optional but welcome)

I’m ready to start as soon as we agree on timing and can share a short sample chapter for you to evaluate before committing to the full edit.