Video Edit Feedback Needed

I recently recorded a site-visit video where I walk viewers through a hectare-by-hectare land measurement and give a short lesson on the topic. I’ve done a basic edit, but before taking it public I need a fresh set of eyes.

Watch the uploaded file from start to finish and tell me, in clear, practical terms, how to tighten the pacing, smooth the cuts, and polish the overall presentation. Pay special attention to captions and on-screen visuals; I want a clean, educational style that clearly labels each measurement without distracting flair.

Along with your detailed notes, craft a brief, punchy opening prompt—one or two lines max—that I can place right at the start so viewers are immediately encouraged to keep watching.

Deliverables should include:
• A time-stamped feedback document highlighting every spot that needs adjustment (cuts, transitions, graphics, audio balance).
• A sample caption frame showing your proposed layout for measurement labels.
• The short viewer prompt mentioned above.

Once I have those three items, I can move straight into the final edit. Let me know if you need anything else to evaluate the footage properly.