Sci-Fi Novel Style Review

I’m ready to share my completed science-fiction manuscript and would like a professional critique that zeroes in on how the writing itself comes across, with special attention to the way the characters speak. Please approach the job less as a beta reader and more as a stylistic analyst: I’m not looking for plot notes or a scene-by-scene breakdown, but rather a clear, actionable assessment of tone, rhythm, and overall readability, anchored by an in-depth look at the dialogue.

You’ll receive the full draft (about 80k words) in Word format. After reading, I’d appreciate a concise report that:

• Highlights strengths and weak spots in my prose, focusing on dialogue authenticity, flow, and consistency
• Points out any jargon or futuristic terminology that feels forced or unclear
• Suggests line-level tweaks or illustrative rewrites where necessary (a handful of concrete examples is fine—I don’t need every line marked up)
• Summarises the overall narrative voice and its suitability for the intended audience

Please deliver a standalone critique document (PDF or Word) at roughly 4-6 pages. Inline comments inside the manuscript are optional; if you prefer leaving tracked changes for illustrative examples, that’s welcome.

Turnaround within two weeks is ideal, but let me know if you need a little longer. Confidentiality is a must. If this sounds like your wheelhouse, let’s talk.