Revise Education Dissertation Chapters

My Masters in Education dissertation came back at 42 %. The university allows a single resubmission and I must lift the mark to at least 50 %. I do not need a full rewrite; I need targeted, scholarly improvements to the Literature Review, Methodology, Findings and, if time permits, the Discussion so that each section meets the programme’s marking criteria.

Literature Review
• Tighten the narrative by clearly identifying gaps in the literature that justify my study.
• Ensure current research (past 5 years) is woven in smoothly and referenced in Harvard style.

Methodology
• Sharpen the rationale for my qualitative design, confirm alignment with the research questions and ethical standards, and clarify sampling, data collection and analysis procedures.

Findings
• Strengthen the presentation of results, ensuring themes are reported coherently and linked back to the research questions.

Acceptance criteria
– Tracked-changes document for each chapter plus a clean copy ready for submission.
– Comments explaining major edits so I can defend them if questioned.
– All sources cited accurately in Harvard format.
– Writing style, tone and structure consistent with UK postgraduate standards, helping me cross the 50 % threshold.

I can supply my full draft, marking rubric and examiner feedback immediately. Please outline how you will approach each chapter and your estimated turnaround time.