Revamp My Whiteboard Explainer

I recently had a whiteboard explainer produced and, while the core message lands, the visuals let it down. The drawings feel rough and the sequence doesn’t pull viewers through the story the way I’d hoped. I’m looking for someone who can start by tightening the script—clarifying the hook, smoothing the transitions, and ensuring every line sets up a stronger visual cue—then rebuild the video around it.

Here’s what I need:
• A refreshed script (same overall message, sharper wording and flow)
• New whiteboard visuals built with noticeably higher-quality drawings and a far more engaging storyboard

Once the script is locked, I’d like you to handle voice-over timing, storyboard frames, illustration, animation, and final assembly so the finished piece feels polished and professional from first second to last.

The current runtime is probably too long; I’m open to adjustments if it improves pacing. Please share links to comparable whiteboard or explainer projects you’ve fully produced, note the tools you prefer (e.g., VideoScribe, Doodly, Adobe Animate, etc.), and outline your typical turnaround time.

I’ll provide the existing video and raw audio on award so you can see exactly what we’re starting with. Looking forward to seeing how you’d bring this story to life.