Punjabi Film Pacing Review

I have a complete rough cut of a Punjabi feature ready for a fresh set of professional eyes. What I need now is an experienced editor / story consultant who can watch the entire film and pinpoint exactly where the rhythm slips, where scenes overstay their welcome, and where the emotional beats don’t land as strongly as they should.

Your task is to dive deep into the cut and give me practical, time-coded notes that address three core areas: overall story flow and pacing, scenes that feel too long or unclear, and the emotional impact on the viewer. I’m looking for more than general impressions; I want concrete, scene-by-scene feedback that I can immediately translate into an improved edit.

To be useful, your notes should include:
• Scene-by-scene comments with exact time stamps.
• Suggestions for trims, re-ordering, or smoother transitions.
• Advice on dialogue tightness, performance nuances, and moments that need an emotional lift.

You can annotate directly in Premiere Pro, Avid, or DaVinci Resolve markers—or supply a detailed written report with frame-accurate references; whichever is most efficient for you. I will share the rough cut via a secure link (about two hours in length) along with a beat sheet and my own initial concerns.

If you have a track record of shaping narrative features—especially Punjabi or other regional-language cinema—your insight will be invaluable. Let me know how you prefer to deliver notes, your typical turnaround for a two-hour film, and a sample of similar consulting work you’ve done.

I’m ready to begin as soon as I find the right collaborator.