Polish Korean Time-Travel Drama Script

I have a completed Korean-style television script that hinges on soul-crossing time travel—an ethereal “spiritual traction” triggered by a life-redemption event. Before I move on to character tweaks or pacing, I need an experienced screenwriter to tighten the story logic, with a laser focus on how this specific time-travel mechanism works from scene to scene.

Your job is to examine every beat where the protagonists slip between timelines, make sure the causal rules stay airtight, and flag or rewrite any moment that could confuse viewers. I want the transitions to feel inevitable yet surprising, the stakes crystal-clear, and the paradoxes resolved in a way that audiences can emotionally track without stopping to question the rules.

Deliverables
• Marked-up script (Final Draft or PDF) showing all recommended changes
• Clean revised draft ready for table read
• Brief logic map that outlines the soul-crossing rules and how each jump advances the redemption arc

I’m looking for someone fluent in K-drama tone who can balance high-concept mechanics with heartfelt resonance. If you’ve already wrangled complex timelines or supernatural devices on screen, I’d love to see how you would elevate mine.