Humanize AI-Written Research Paper

I’m providing a complete research paper whose ideas and sources are sound, but the draft was generated with AI and still feels robotic. Your task is to rewrite the paper from top to bottom so it reads like an engaging, well-structured undergraduate project while preserving every argument, fact, and citation already in place.

Key goals
• Natural, human flow—varied sentence structure, clear transitions, and an authentic academic voice.
• Consistent undergraduate-level depth: no oversimplification, no graduate-level jargon.
• Strict MLA formatting throughout, including in-text citations and the Works Cited page.
• Low AI-detection probability; the final draft should pass common tools such as GPTZero or Turnitin’s AI checker without raising flags.

Deliverables
1. Final polished manuscript in DOCX (and PDF if convenient).
2. A tracked-changes version so I can compare revisions.

Everything else—tone, structure, and word count—should stay aligned with the original research intent. If you have questions about sources or need clarifications while rewriting, just let me know.

Also, if possible can you research if Columbia Pipeline Group is using a software model for this predictive maintenance technique? If so, what they are using and add that to the paper