Horror Sci-Fi Screenplay Rewrites - Australia, Canada, US

I have a completed feature-length horror-science-fiction script that needs a sharpened second set of eyes. The story structure is locked, but I want fresher, more unsettling dialogue in a few key conversations and tighter scene progression in several spots so the tension lands with the same dread you feel in The Ring while still keeping the neon-noir vibe of Blade Runner.

Here’s what I’m looking for:
• A revised draft (Final Draft or PDF) reflecting new dialogue beats, trimmed or expanded descriptions where the pacing drags, and any small continuity fixes you spot.
• A brief change log or in-document comments so I can see what you touched and why.

If you enjoy combining atmospheric horror with grounded sci-fi, please send a short writing sample or produced pages that showcase your style, and drop a line about your favorite horror film—that tells me a lot about your instincts.

I’ll keep the collaboration light and focused: once you review the current draft, we’ll agree on the exact scenes to tackle, you’ll take a single pass, and I’ll give quick notes for a final polish. Look forward to reading your work and seeing how you’d dial up the dread.