Developmental Edit 126k Novel

I have a completed 126,000-word fiction manuscript and now need a thorough developmental edit. I am looking for big-picture insight into the story’s structure, character arcs, and pacing, delivered directly inside the document as clear, actionable margin comments.

Please pay special attention to:
• World-building
• Dialogue
• Overall reader engagement

I will provide the manuscript as a Word (.docx) file and would like the edited version returned with Track Changes and all comments visible. If you rely on specific editorial tools such as Microsoft Word, Scrivener exports, or ProWritingAid, that’s fine—just keep the final hand-off in .docx.

Your developmental comments should highlight what’s working, flag any confusing or slow sections, and suggest concrete ways to tighten scenes or deepen character motivation. A concise closing note that summarises the main themes of your feedback is welcome, but the primary feedback must live in-text.

If you have experience shaping long-form fiction, especially epic or speculative genres, I’d love to see samples of your edits or testimonials from past authors. Let me know your estimated turnaround time and any questions before we begin.